Response to literature
“I don’t care what people think. I’ll just prance down 2nd street with my knees high.” Raymond’s Run is a very inspirational story about a young girl that takes pride in what she does and her optimistic autistic brother. Toni Cade Bambara spins a tale of happiness and pride as she tells of a girl with dreams of winning the May Race.
Thats it so far... :P
I like your descriptive words in the begining
ReplyDeleteGood job! Maybe work on the structure of your paragraph. I like how you choose to do a differnt story than tell tale heart!
ReplyDeleteYes, I agree with Haleigh... Just may be work on the structure of the paragraph, but besides that it was really good so far. (:
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