Response to literature (intro): (this isn't in first person...change it to "How can a pale blue eye... or It is odd that a pale blue eye would drive somebody to the point of insanity"I wonder how a pale blue eye could drive someone mad; so mad, they felt the urge to kill. “It is impossible to say how the first idea entered my brain; but once conceived it haunted me day and night.” (Poe pg)-Edgar Allan Poe delete this. Also, comment on the quote you included...it needs transition. The story, Tell-tale Heart, by Edgar Allan Poe, is an intriguing, fingernail-biting story;not needed that leaves you astounded. Tell-tale Heart is the story of a man who feels that he is haunted by an eye of an old man thatwhom he works for. Edgar Allan Poe explains the pain and the fear that the man feels about the eye. So much pain and fear that it drives him mad.fragment sentenceTell-tale Heart, by Edgar Allan Poe, has a creepy rising action, skin-chilling imagery, and suspense that putskeeps you on your toes.

Great start, Cassidy. You have great writing style.

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