Sydnie Ross
3/4 ELA
Response to Literature
“I made up my mind to take the life of the old man.” A quote from the great Edgar Allan Poe’s suspenseful story, Tell-Tale Heart. The man's ''Evil Eye'' is making him go incredibly insane. In the story, the psycho man spies on him and waits until the right time to lurk in on him and take his life. Is everything okay in the end? Does he get away with ending an innocent man's life? This intense story shows gruesome plot, unbelievable imagery, and creates and shows phenomenal characterization.
Good start, I think you should use a little higher vocabulary though, cant wait to read the rest.
ReplyDeleteagreed:)
ReplyDeleteGood quote for your hook
ReplyDeletegreat start, great vocab, great hook!..your essay will be great!:))
ReplyDeleteHey. I like your introduction, but you might want to try adding some higher vocabulary...other than that...its great! Can't wait to hear the rest! :)
ReplyDeletegreat introduction! (:
ReplyDeleteI love the quote for the intro! (:
ReplyDeletesounds great! i love the quote!
ReplyDeleteI like how you used gruesome and phenomal, also I think that's pretty high vocab (just saying), good response, I honestly just don't like how it gives away the story in the first paragraph, but great story.
ReplyDeletei mean response
ReplyDeleteluv the quote!!(:
ReplyDeletei like cedarss comment the mostt!
ReplyDeleteI WIN!!!!!
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