you have some errors when you are spacing your punctuation.but other than that, great introduction.-Sydniee.
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I like all your adjectives, really good, Sydnie is right, some of your punctuation is off, I like the picture and your quote, really good, good story.
a mad?? haha other than that its awesome!! (:
you have some errors when you are spacing your punctuation.
ReplyDeletebut other than that, great introduction.
-Sydniee.
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ReplyDeleteI like all your adjectives, really good, Sydnie is right, some of your punctuation is off, I like the picture and your quote, really good, good story.
ReplyDeletea mad?? haha other than that its awesome!! (:
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