Marijuana Legalization
Violence, insanity, common sense destroyed entirely. Are those the things that you want to be the characteristics of the majority of the world’s population? Doing drugs such, as marijuana will destroy your brain cells and your physical appearance as well. This extremely dangerous drug is actually in consideration of becoming legalized. It should not be!!!
i like the hook it shows a lot of imagery.i think you should put an exclamation point at the end of the second to last sentence to show how its a dumb idea to legalize it.
ReplyDeleteam with legalizing marijuana. i am strong about my opinion, and i am doing my persuasive essay on it. i was the one who got the idea, and asked about it in class. It should be legalized because it would give medical benefits, and eliminate 87% of the criminals in jail. 87% of them are in jail for possession of marijuana. That would eliminate jail overcrowding, and lower the taxes that our parents pay. about 6.1 billion dollars are WASTED every year, into trying to prohibit marijuana. With that money, the country could use money to easily start marijuana gardens. This would eliminate the criminal market, and give us more ease at night. Mafia, and other groups, wouldn't be dangerous anymore, and this would also mend the broken relationships the US has with other countries, and calm the country from and fights regarding marijuana. We would sleep safer at night, knowing this. that's why i am with legalizing marijuana. :)
ReplyDelete